Sunday, 14 April 2013



You’ve read it a thousand times—the infamous DISCLAIMER…

This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, and places are fictitious. Any resemblance to actual locales, organizations, or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.

The fact is, I don't know of any author who doesn't include different characteristics or quirks from people they know or knew into some of their characters. We do “mash-ups” up personalities to come up with our own unique characters! In PHOENIX: THE RISING, the teacher, the assistant principal, and Charsey, the ditzy friend, are a compilation of personalities I knew. All the others are strictly from my imagination, but even then, our readers may think we modeled a certain character after someone they know, ie: a friend from high school thinks Eli, my hero, is modeled after a kid I had a crush on in tenth grade! My crush was smokin’ hot and I now have to admit he does look a lot like Eli--without the wings, of course! No wonder I chose that picture when Sour Cherry Designs presented it to me! See what I mean?

Sometimes authors use their own lives on which to base a story. We may start off thinking we’re going to write an autobiography, but then think, “Hey, this would make a fantastic novel if I could take this part of my life and fictionalize it!” It’s called autobiographical fiction. (DUH!!) I’ve been working on one myself. Here’s an excerpt. 

I’ve changed the names to protect the innocent…



I could hear them. Little voices. Little oices coming from the trashcan by the door of my brother’s bedroom closet. Little voices whispering so rapidly, so quietly, I couldn’t quite understand what they were saying.

Mom told me the last time I heard the voices that it was just my imagination. I imagined a lot of things at night. Shadows turned into spiders sliding across the wall. Thomas's fat, six-toed paws padding across the linoleum turned into the feet of wicked little gnomes running under my bed. Yes, I knew it was just my imagination, but knowing that didn't make any difference. The fear was too real--and it won. Always. I pulled the covers over my head, and squeezed my legs together tighter, praying that the feeling would pass--praying that I wouldn’t have to walk by that trashcan filled with those scary little people and their scary little voices.

I pissed myself only once before. It happened four years earlier in first grade when Tanya McDonald decided to take a nap in the class bathroom. I didn’t know I could ask Miss Mills to use the one in the hall--so I sat at my desk, crossed my legs, and waited. I waited until the butterfly wings began tickling the back of my throat. By the time I stood, it was too late. Hot pee raced down the inside of my pumpkin-colored cable tights and flooded my new, white, patent-leather Mary Janes. Across the hall, Billy Maynard leaned across his desk and watched me through the open doors with those big, black-rimmed glasses magnifying his chocolate brown eyes. I loved Billy--but he saw me. He saw me piss myself.

And now, the butterflies were back--but, so were the voices.


Mom’s warm body lay motionless behind mine, holding me close. On the other side of her was my sister, Ann, who was two years older than me. A second bed held my younger brother, Mark, and two of my older brothers, Steven and Matt.


“What is it, Jaynie?”


“I have to pee.”

Mom pulled the covers down and we climbed out of bed. I buried my face in the lavender warmth of her flannel nightgown and wrapped my arms around her hips as she walked me across the frigid linoleum floor, past the trashcan full of those scary little people with those scary little voices, to the door of the closet. She opened it, grabbed a flashlight off a side shelf, turned it on, and aimed it at the floor. Two startled cockroaches scuttled out of the light, disappearing into the darkness.

“There you go, honey,” she whispered. “Try to do it quietly.”

The light reflected off the metallic sides of the make-shift toilet.

You see, this is what happens when my drunken father passes out at the bottom of the stairwell. I have to piss in a coffee can.

About the Author:

BETTE MAYBEE is a new author who loves to dabble in different genres, but they always have one thing in common. Romance! She just can’t help herself! Whether it’s young adult, paranormal, or women’s fiction, all her tales must have a dark, swoon-worthy hunk as the center of attention!

Bette has lived most of her life in Iowa with her husband, Tim, eating corn-on-the-cob and tipping cows. (JK—she’s never tipped a single cow, although she does moo at them whenever she gets a chance.) She’s also a mom to three gorgeous kids, Allison, John, and Tim, and a mother-in-law (the good kind) to Tim’s beautiful wife, Pippi. After surviving a fifteen-year career as a middle school Science and Language Arts teacher in the Catholic school systems (for which she deserves a MEDAL!), she now spends her days assisting university faculty, who, thank goodness, don’t have a habit of doing the gallon challenge as her former charges did and are easily tamed with a bowl of Jolly Ranchers. She reserves her evenings for writing and tweeting. Phoenix: The Rising is Bette's first published novel.
PHOENIX: THE RISING is available from Evernight Teen and other major distributors.

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